- Mono prints- Love the dark textures and the characters.
- 'Brilliant concept driven work, vibe suites that subject.
- ' More graphic and shape would be nice to see.
- Tone of voice.
- Print textures are great- combine with drawings?
- Dramatic and dynamic.
- Initials already look like finals.
- Very ambiguous but can see links. - Sophisticated.
- Realistic feel.
Improvement points.
- There were no improvement comments on the concept as such. This could be because I have not done enough idea generation or that the concept so far is fine and I just need keep pulling ideas out and making final images.
- However one good comment that I am going to try was the box could just be an illustration on its own. Why add any extra information to it? what will this add or will it just confuse things?
- I think from here I need to go back to print room do some more mono prints based on the roughs I have done so far and see if anything new comes out from it and then rough again , keep generating ideas.
- I also need to clarify I am trying to illustrate, I feel like this aspect of the project is getting forgotten about , I need to re write my project proposal.
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