Tuesday, 14 March 2017

Group tutorial feedback form.

Comment on what is working well about the project idea and research ?


  • Visual metaphors and roughs needed. 
  • Screen prints working well - architectural good to develop into more imagery. 

Comments on the quality and quantity of sketches/development work done so far. 
  • Lovely playful screen prints and monoprints,  Starting point and elements could be used further in work.
  • Traibal Masks - Cultures to be compared.
Give constructive feedback on ways this project could be strengthened and developed. 
  • Find the articals your'e going to create, work for ...
  •  Grayson Perry 
  • Benefit street
  • Look at documentaries how could you apply editorial context to this?
  • Look at social classes in different cultures and draw comparisons.
  • Look at the royal academy website for reference.
  • Rewrite proposal for more focus. 
  • Look at Peter Howson and Sue Coe- animal rights artist. 
So my path has changed again and i'm going to be moving to editorial . Taking the editorial approach makes my life much easier.  I can really visualise the topic i'm approach within an editorial context and it makes much more sense for it to be there. This mean I am rewriting my project proposal to fit into this context. It open up my options for what I can make and I can be more opinionated as i have a lot of opinons on this topic.  The session was really helpful because I have been quite lost for a few days now trying to work out how I am going to get around this. Find articles and illustrating them , them from there making gifs for a digital platfrom. This will give the project much more structure and something to aim for , I think this has been the problem I didn't know what I am aiming for. But now I have an aim I can get on with it.  




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