Mega crit feedback -Responsive 503.

This was a really useful crit, as it was really good to see how others have designed there layout and how much text they have put onto there pages. I realised during the crit I had got project report mixed up with presentation boards. So I had put a tone of writing onto some of the pages in which I evaluated my finals and my process. The Presentation boards need to be short and snappy and more like a mood board of finals and roughs rather then an evaluation.
I also think overall the arrangement could be better, Some images can be stand alone on some pages, for example the batsford bird and more YCN posters.

Spelling is a big issue and something I really struggle with so I need to make sure I spell correct. Get serval different people to prof read the final texts.
Keeping the font size consistent as well would be a good idea and need to watch the size as well , the project titles could be smaller. I need to less afraid of space in this one. The images need to be able to be seen clearly and have breathing space.
Personal branding could also be an idea ? It seems to help the professionalism come through and goes that nexted level and create yourself into a brand.
Overall I am surprised at the amount of work I have produced for responsive , as I didn't think I made that much but actually I have created quite a substantial amount of work. And it was only when putting the work together did I see how much I have improved in the application of colour and several colour separation in screen print. It is a technique that I am very keen to keep and really improve on because I have a lot of ideas about how I could improve the technique and help it have a more experimental element perhaps ?