Final Crit and Peer review. Feed back.

Overall the feed back was very positive. People commented on the aesthetic of the prints and even though I was using different print techniques my tone of voice is still coming through. Another part of development that people gave positive feedback on,  which I was surprised at, was the stitching into fabric with the printed lino. Using the thread to add the second colour in different ways, for example the way I created patterens out of the stitching and the extra texture this brought into the image. The presentation of the prints was also noted, that they looked professional and this was enhanced by covering them in film and creating the black book for them to sit in. Keeping all presentation books black was a good note that someone gave me. By doing this it would keep it all unified and neat. Recommendations for my future work where to definitely do more lino, sell some of the prints that I have created for this brief. To carry on mixing lino with screen and adding a new element of then stitch into that and creating products out of that for example T shirts. The sting went down well to people commenting that it had a note of difference to the others that they where humorous  and lighthearted but mine had a more serious and thoughtful tone and atmosphere. But from seeing other peoples I really wish that I had spent more time developing the movements of the panther, they could have been better, it did seem static. But the sound track really complimented the whole sting well.
In the peer review similar comments where said about the work as a whole that there was a lot of it and talked more about presentation ideas. So my next step is to get presentation down and sorted. I am going to create some folders to place all my development work in to make it look neater as at the moment it is just a lot of sheet of varying size clipped together.