Editoral images

Feedback for crit:
Effectiveness of the concepts/message:


Very Chilling imagery, dark and spooky.

• Very mysterious dark.
• Games.
• Haunting , speaks of dark topics.

 People who have left comments have not said what they think the concept is much, they have just commented on the emotion they feel about the image. This could be because the image don't communicate very clearly , and I think that this could be true with some of them as it is not clear who the author is from these. But it would have been good if people had put that because i'm not sure weather that is a problem or not.

• Moody, sinister atmosphere.
• imagery is great- love how you've linked it through all three, Interested who the author is though? are these strong links to there work?  

I think that there is a strong link to Lee's work during the time she grew up there was the civil rights movement and in her book black people and under class white are described through the metaphor of a Mocking bird , this is why I have made the bird Motif and played around with that, creating it into a symbol.

Visual quality and craft:

• Traditional aesthetic yet well composed .
• Textures really compliment the style.  

• Lovely Patterns e.g. landscape.
• Dark tone helps to drive the concept. 
• A lot of white space for the landscape.

I agree with that final point but I think having a similar textured background as the portrait one would have been too much with the pattern and the birds would have been lost.