Feedback of storyboards.

There is a good amount of roughing and planning been done and you can see how roughs helped the development of the final story boards. I have found roughing useful in the development of the stings, I find it easier to rough when I have the different elements like the prints completed. It gives me something to work from and helps me to visualise the intended outcome clearer.
 The idea that seemed popular was the trees going into the eye. I did have a worry that this was going to be too complicated to animate but I think it will work. The animation can be almost clock work like, jagged in movement and with a texture flickering over the top it could work and has the potential to work well hopefully. The aesthetic of the frames has some positive responses too , links in with mood and style of the prints. Using the panther with the human was a good idea and it is a good roundup of all of my images, and animating this running with the flickering texture like I said could potentially work well. So my next steps are going to be do a quick finally storyboard and then start animating the final sting.