Wednesday, 21 October 2015

final bear poster evaluation.

The aspects that I am happy with in this final poster are:

  • The techniques used, really bold, neat, effective finish.
  • Each shape is consistent and the varying sizes contrasts well together. 
  •  The character design of the bear is really nice.Keeping the same expression and body language  throughout adds a humours element. A grumpy who is just getting thrown about and doesn't really care what happens to him. 
  • The colours could be slightly boring but , I think that they allowed me to add bolder details , for example the texture on the blown up bear.


Thing that I found difficult :

  • Idea generation. Most of the initial ideas I came up with where over complicated.
  • The layout was also hard to compose as I was working with set shapes, but changing the shape of the bear help with this.
  •  In some places on the final poster I used gouache, and in part I think that this was a mistake for example on the propeller hat I over used the white and it looks messy.


 Things that I would develop further:

  • Experimenting more with colour ,  maybe a lift yellow or light blue background. 
  • Considering the layout more , it is squished a bit in the middle and could have used with being spread out more , make the text easier to read. 
  • Type needs more development as well , not that easy to read which is a shame.


I feel happy with the way the poster has communicated and looks , but the main feed back from the crit was really good but most people liked the look more better then the concept.        

 

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