Things I am happy with:
- I like how the red circle contains the key features of the image , I like how it bring attention well to these. Having the circle in the centre as well also dose this.
- The composition of the different photocopies. I only used a few photocopies because i wanted to keep the image simple and I was slightly apprehensive about over crowding the image.
- I like the effect of the spray paint on the eye, it give the image a more urban and modern look, whitest adding more emotion into the image.
- The eyes in the wings look peculiar and the head on top of the snake gives the image a very sinter dark side.
- I am really happy with the chose of colour in the poster and throughout the series, red ad black and very dark colours and i think symbolise what i am trying to say about empress cixi well for example the red represents her killings.
Things I want to improve:
- The image looks noise but I think that this could be down to the quality of the photocopies and the texture of the printing inks.
- I think that the flies around the edge could be slightly too much but on the other hand I think that they create a good pattern.
- I think that the cutting on the face could have been more refined, i could have played more i think with cutting out shapes on the face. looking back I should have done a few more experiments with the face.
- The eyes on the wings could have been better incorporated into the wings they seem a bit seperate.
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