- From the feed back, there is quite a bit of debate into which sketch is the strongest but number 3 was mentioned most. The Chess idea could lead to some further interesting texture experiments and still has a concept which is relevant and political.
- number 6 was also mentioned for composition.
Comment on the visual quality and composition of the sketches. How can they be improved?
- Keep it simple , a good piece of advice I tend to overcomplicate things and keeping it simple is probably the key to this and a way to ensure the message I want to get across communicates well.
- I should carry on keeping my tone of voice. dark messy textres , it enhances the authorship.
- As a next step I need to start working in colour more. keep the dusty red colour.
- the hanging idea, is there a way in which you could show this without humanising it too much. I don't really want to pursue this idea any more as I can see this being a unsteady path as if communicated poorly or taken the wrong way by the viewer could be really bad and will not be reflecting my true intentions with the image.
My own question:
How can I make the composition stronger?
- Use purely symbols, it is a more subtle techniques rather then using full figures.
- A change of perspective for example looking down. and think about where the game pieces , how are they being played? have some been 'won'?
From this I need to develop the images more . Think about the colours, perspective the content of the scene, and then I need to get making. Need to do more texture experiments too, and start creating symbols to represent the different elements.
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