Things I am happy with;
- I think that the meaning of the book is clear, having the hats included on ever page of the book cover makes it obvious.
- The pages are consistent with one another , similar colours and shapes. This bring the different sections that make up the book cover together nicely , making it one complete image.
- The big hat on the front with the little person next to it gives a good narrative to the title, however I think that the composition of the text could have been better placed.
- Repartition of the hats has a nice rhythm and the individuality of each tiny person is feature that I really like about the cover.
Thing I want to improve:
- Maybe I could have printed less hats, there is a lot, is it too much?
- The text is something which I think could have done with more development, the spacing between each letter could have been improved to make it easily readable, seems tightly spaces.
- Using lower case letters may have made the font softer and would suite the style more, or types font would of had structure and good spacing.
- Colours could have been bolder, they look slightly saturated.
If I was to do it again:
- I would spend more time on developing the type I think that it lets the cover down slightly.
- The composition of the front page could have been neater.
- In future projects I need to experiment with digital medium more, unfortunately there was a problem with printing so I had to change my ideas to fit this problem, but happy with the outcome.
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