Book cover roughs. studio brief 3

Three best out of the 5.

• Type in this one is good but needs more development,  but not keen on the small people , should have done them in coloured pencil  crayon.
•  Like the back page, but front page could have more on it and can be composed better.

•  Big hat with cut out paper person, flat head emphasises missing hat. 
• Has a slight narrative.
•  Composition is okay but the type is squished, really need to develop type more! Give it space. 
• Back page is okay , less hats cold be and option? bit to crowed.

• Really like the side flaps , lots of small hats in a pattern would work really well and adds detail to they simple design on the front of this one.
•  Small person big hat, good contrast in size but the small people.
• Clear that it is a hat and the back page links nicely to the front , leaving it plain black looks better.