Things I am happy with:
- The aesthetic of the image, the style of the image and the type works well together.
- Using paper cuts to create the image for the positives. By using cut paper it has allowed me to create bold block shapes , but with cut details into them.
- The composition of the type in connection with the images, the peak of the main focal point of the image and the birds, leads up to the title.
- Having the birds around the edge looks really good as the direction of them leads the viewer around the image.
- Keeping the image looking clean and neat, not over complicated.
Things I want to improve if I was to do this task again:
- The colour of the final poster, I am not sure on. I think that it works however I much prefer the newsprint print above. I think that it suites the aesthetic of the image more.
- I would have work more on the composition of the image. I didn't put in any background or mid ground, this was because I didn't want to over complicate the image, but I still think a could have added it in some how.
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