Feed back from group crit:

• Underground maps of drug dens and hidden worlds.
• What is a suitable visual symbol for these ideas, Bugs and better the needles. 
• Like the map viewpoints.
• can you create more verity with your figures?- slave ships.
• Darkness in tones and symbol, GRITTIER!! 
• When the symbols are perfect you loose something - make it messy. 
• Maybe live trace cut paper instead of vectors.
• Investigate maps , plans of sewerage systems and underground plans.
• great links to other artists. 

I really need to play and experiment with other visual symbols and think about what they mean and the arrangement of them. The paper cut heads that were woven into shapes were better received then the roughs that i did , i need to explore this idea more as well. Using darker colours and some textures may make the images look grittier and fit with the idea better. I also think that live trace is a really good option i will need to try this because i am really struggling with drawing vectors.