Things I am happy with:
- Norbert lives!!!
- The overall look. I am really glad that I chose to used collage to make this image. It looks effective it follows the central theme of my project which I taking and appropriating decaying decaying or dead parts of the human body.
- I also like how the wings move and isolate in sequence with each other, the free movements looks better. But also how the left hand wing touched the eye to make it open, I think that it a good interaction between the different composition.
- The feet/toes movements looks okay, makes Norbert look content and happy.
- I character its self (Norbert), it has a sweet movements, but it isn't too cute. after showing one person the character they said, he is a bit cute but at the same time freaky as hell.
Things to improve on if I was to do this again:
- I think the toes movements could flow better. It is jittery and needs to slow down a bit.
- I could have added a background, It could have just been a simple dulled down texture? However I think that compositionally the white background pulls all the focus onto the character.
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